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introduction

Wiritng Task 1​

Overview

  • Introduction for bar charts, line graphs, tables, and pie charts is the same

Steps-by-steps

  • Look at what information we do not put in the introduction
  • Use the description given
  • Look at other information like units
  • Paraphrase

Note

  • If there are two tables. 1 sentece for 1 chart and using while
  • Change from noun to verb or verb to noun
  • Just focus on the desciprition provided

Note for higher band

  • No need to change
    • Not a better word: shows, illustrates, or give the information about is the same band
  • More precise, clearer information
    • For example: ttypical/average monthly sale should be the amount of money madef rom the sales ...
    • Change from average monthly sale to in a typical month
  • Change the order of the information means create a unique grammar structure
  • Be more specific, be more accurate and using nice range of lanageu
  • Better words: Typical month sales to typical month revenue
  • Group categories if there many
    • from the sales of 6 food and drink items
  • ...
    • Fish imported to HOw much the ... spent in total on imported fish or the total expenditure
  • Change
    • How to the way
    • the use of to for use as
    • how to the process of, the method of, the steps involed in
    • collect to collection
  • Change the position of places, like from the end to the very first of the inotrudciton
    • the way [place] collects and processes rainwater to be used for drinking water
  • ...
    • is collected, collecting, the collection, collects (passive vocie, prep, noun, present simpe)
    • how, the way, the process of, the method of, the steps involed in
    • for the use of, for use as, in order to use it for, to be used for
  • use better word
    • they way [S] Recyles rainwater to make it safe for drinking
    • the way in which [S] harvests and rescyles rainwater so that it can be safely consumed

Common mistakes

  • Not an essay
  • Use the correct words like diagram, chart, etc. If it is chart, you do not need to change that word or you can improve it is a bar chart of pie chart, etc.
  • Not using "below, provided" ,etc.
  • Use the correct information "sales" or "typical/average monthly sales", etc.
  • Avoid using "the example" because we are writing reporting
  • Use the categories in the right order
  • If there are multiple groups, instead of listing all you show write x groups
  • Remember the word and before the final item
  • If you do not know the correct word, please dont use to avoid appending mistakes, like cafe is different from coffee shop, ENglish is not Britishtah, village is not town
  • Use capital letters effectively (axis from data moved to lowercase)
  • Should not repeat information
    • Portpotion before and repeat units are percentage in that table
  • Avoid illogical information organization
    • Information about table, then chart and then table again
  • Diagram
    • Life cycle to
      • the stages of the life of a frog
      • the phases a frog passes though during its life
      • the stages of development that a frog passes thorugh during its lifetime
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